Saturday, 8 November 2014

COP3 / Presentation

COP 3 / CRITICAL WRITING
PRESENTATION.

This i the presentation I put together to show the progress on my dissertation subject so I could anther feedback and recommendations on my topic and its direction.
I know that my subject is still quite vague but i feel that this presentation gives a good idea on the subject i want to look at and the feedback i get will hopefully help me to find a more defined topic with in it.


I used my experience with Bone Broths as an example. I mentioned the fact that when i asked this company who they are and what they wished to portray to their market audience, The basically gave me a list of who they were and what they wanted for the aesthetic of their brand.Now do I just go by what they tell me, even though it may not be accurate or even true? Or do I investigate further and take on that responsibility?





FEEDBACK:

- It needs to be more defined and focused

- Due to the fact that i used Alcohol as an example, Should you solely concentrate on this kind of product as a focus?

This is the only feedback I received which was not very helpful. i already know that I am currently a little vague on the subject, however I do not want to just concentrate on Alcohol because I am not particularly interested in this topic and I do not really drink.

For me it is mostly the the choice and morals of a designer rather than any particular product.



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